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Post by Nina Fri Nov 15, 2013 7:45 pm

Hey girls! sorry this thread is opened late. OTL
And because I was late, instead of the thread opened for only 24 hours, i extended this until 48 hours. Please send the links for your codes and graphics here. ONLY THOSE. You have 48 hours to reply to this thread with your minor tasks! Very Happy


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Post by Jesskuu Fri Nov 15, 2013 8:53 pm

AAAH. So exciting. owo

Lyrics: https://app.box.com/s/vn924x3t19tirmn0odf0
Graphic: https://app.box.com/s/foo7fi5ugzllxs6qxxud
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Post by Wolfy Fri Nov 15, 2013 11:11 pm

Graphic: https://app.box.com/s/8dc8tngaz6itvnftbh67
Lyrics: https://app.box.com/s/j25cisl71dbz6wx4p637

:3333

EDIT: Black backround won't show in box's preview, and some group parts don't show since they're originally in white. xDD
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Post by Kia Sat Nov 16, 2013 12:42 am

Lyrics: https://app.box.com/s/hjcpk0uxrjwg2sswsmyy
Graphic: https://app.box.com/s/gs7jitwdtca69p8789cz

YAYY ^o^
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Post by My-chan Sat Nov 16, 2013 1:06 am

Yosh~

minna your graphs are so purrrty *^*

Anyways mine

graphic: http://myforgottenworld.webs.com/OHP_Mychuu_Ambitious.png
CC: http://myforgottenworld.webs.com/Ambitious_code.htm


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Post by Maiko Sat Nov 16, 2013 3:33 am

* o*
First time ever using this site to make a graphic, so i apologize in advance. xD
Graphic: https://2img.net/h/oi41.tinypic.com/awoxn4.jpg

AAAAND i stalked a lot of ya'lls colorcodes so i could get these perfect. o wob
CC: https://app.box.com/s/d4xlkovbi5o2wqn6qdex
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Post by KiraxKana Sat Nov 16, 2013 4:39 am

Okay, here we go. Razz

Colour Codes: https://app.box.com/s/g5k7l0ybn43f2s2u62dc
Graphics: https://app.box.com/s/nyogmcvc195f8kq8as7l

Once again realize how much art and I don't mix...
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Post by vaniialu Sat Nov 16, 2013 7:09 am

I didn't see this post LOL xDD

Lyrics: https://app.box.com/s/52r4k8n5ushpi97eufiq
Graphic: https://app.box.com/s/yprigqbqyfb8z7d8bzxk
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Post by Guest Sun Nov 17, 2013 1:13 am

Gyahh sorry for being kind of late I guess ;_; I only noticed about the 2nd round tasks this morning..

Lyrics: https://app.box.com/s/9uurekt9kss53jo6n06z
Graphic: https://app.box.com/s/wzbydyrilg6z67f91ip2

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Post by DJ-chii Sun Nov 17, 2013 1:47 pm

sorry I was in Manila for a day literally just got back thanks Vaniia and My-chuu chuu for yelling at me on fb but i had no internet thats why im late -shot- xD
graphic: https://app.box.com/s/hd23zufau9a5arsk78jm
CC: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UOEfmDpLkJHywsuMSqYg9iQZSa_KdMXGNLpl08kNVho/edit?usp=sharing
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Post by Nina Mon Nov 18, 2013 3:09 pm

Okay everyone in on time! yay! omedetou!
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Post by Nina Sun Dec 01, 2013 6:05 pm

Okay! I've finished judging your graphics. The codes will come soon.

Okay so these 2 tasks do not contribute to your final score for this round. This is a test for you to learn about your skills and for me to give you advice with these tasks~

Okay, here's my comments on your graphics:

Jessie:
I like the colorfulness of your graphic. however, the white color for the names makes them disappear in the upper portion of the graphic. if this is for a light-up mv though, with no one singing it would be fine, but otherwise, other colors would be nice. And in the system, Ayane do not sing old musume songs, it's in Joudeki. But that's alright for now. I like the cut-out style of momusu as well as the big space for the translation. so nice job. Smile

Wolfy:
I admire the uniqueness since you put a concert version of ambitious with shin momusu. However, if we're gonna use a pv version, it'll be a little off. I like how you made the colors of the names different, but some member colors do not match which is understandable. it'll be also good to put the name of the subgroup the song belongs in~ I also like the frame you've put in. good work.

Kia:
I really like your color palette and blends here. The graphic is very pleasing to look at. Really nice work~ Same with wolfy, it would be nice to put in Joudeki in there too.

Mychuu:
I like how you stuck to the theme of the mv and the cut-out diamonds are very nice. There is a balance between left and right (since the left side has a video and subs, there is equally something popping in the right side). And nice work putting the title in romanji, kana and English. but yeah, it'll be good to put in joudeki too. good job~

Maiko:
This is a nice job considering you've haven't handled doing graphics in a while. the way you cut momusu's picture shows though so it's good to clean that up. And it seems like the picture was resize not on scale which makes momusu look chubbier and squeezed. And I think the bar for the translations is a little too small and too tilted making it a bit hard to read. I like the fonts you used and the colors too. The graphics really pops out. However, I think the name of the project disappears in the background so it's good to use a different color for it. but nice work~

Kana:
I think you missed out putting your name in the picture. LOL. Nice work on blending and cropping the picture. And the sparkly background really brings out the glam theme of the song. again it's good to put in joudeki. However you could add a little bit more of elements into it to make it less plain. but then again, good work~

Vaniia:
Now this is a really fun graphic. I really like the fonts and how the title is outlined. I like how the names are arranged too. and the background is simple but I think really did well. The video slot is a little small though since there is some more space on it's sides. And I'm a little unsure of where to place the translations here. But anyway, I love the hearts and nice job.

Neru:
I really like the font you used. It's in the theme of the mv. And screenshots of the mv or concerts are really the hype these days I guess. it's nice. But I think it might be good to add a bit more contrast to this. but good work.

DJ:
Again, this is not an ayane release. LOL. this is joudeki so just to clear then up. but yeah, it's understandable. I think there is a little too much going on in this graphic. I think a better and plainer background might work with it. I like the little clips of momusu on the bottom though. And I think the momusu cutout on the side could use a bit more cleaning up. The title looks like it has no space whereas you can actually put it more to the left to make it breathe. But all elements are in here which is really good. just a little more on the arrangement. Still, nice work.

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